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Wednesday, August 19, 2020

Persuasive writing

Why we should wear a uniform to school.

                  

I am team yes and my points are,

  •  A uniform will represent your school. 

  • If you didn't have on trend clothes you could get bullied.

  • If you were in an accident after or before school people could identify you and contact the school.

  • Teachers don’t need to worry about kids wearing inappropriate clothes to school.

  • You don’t need to choose your clothes every morning.


Do you want to take 20 minutes to get dressed in the morning before school   Kia ora my name is Luna and I would like to tell you about why we should wear a uniform to school.  Let's start with my first point,  a uniform will represent your school, when you go out on a school trip and if you behave beautifully, people might know what school you come from, and say to people that our school is a good school. 

Now for my second point, If you didn't have on trend clothes you could get bullied, the reason you might get bullied is because you might have on trend clothes, on trend clothes are an important part of looking cool and being popular, and you might get bullied if you had old and dirty clothes. 

Now for my third point, If you were in an accident after or before school people could identify you and contact the school, if you get in an accident or get up to mischief people around you will know what school you come from and contact the school. 

Now the fourth point, teachers don’t need to worry about kids wearing inappropriate clothes to school, this is one of the biggest reasons I think we should wear a uniform, and I think that if kids wear what they want some kids might choose to wear inappropriate clothes. 

And finally for my last point, you don’t need to choose your clothes every morning, do you want to be stuck choosing your clothes every morning? Well I don’t want to be choosing my clothes for 20 minutes, So this is why I have this point. 

Are you team yes or no?



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